Description of Setting/ Ambiance/ Atmosphere
First example
It was a clear little cottage set beside a bubbling brook. Vines of honeysuckle framed the door and windows and the study thatched roof was a perfect match to the pin lattice windows.
The door creaked gently as Goldilocks pushed it open. She entered into a warm and cosy living room. On the far wall hung a painting of wild flowers in a glided frame. On the table in the centre of the room two white candles glowed. Around the table ere three chairs; a great bi chair, a middle-sized chair and a teeny tiny chair.
Second example
I shuddered with terror when the tow boys flashed me their sinister smiles. Grisly images of what had happened to other before me were still vividly etched in my mind. My whole body went limp when they took a step forward. A tide of desperation washed thriugh me when i realise that no help was available. I was being cornered by two ruthless boys whoese thoughts were filled with darkness and evil
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