Wednesday, May 28, 2008

155Days!

Action type of Introduction

First example
Goldilocks raced past the bubbling stream and tore down the muddy trail sending insects and small animals scuttling madly for safety. The forest floor was littered with twigs, fallen branches and dead leaves. One misstep and she would be sent sprawling into the dirt.


She ducked under an outstretch branch of a sycamore tree, but caught her dress in the thorns of a bramble bush. She jerked it free and kept on running. Hot, agonising pain shot through her left side. A stitch. Goldilock's heart slammed against her ribcage in a delirium of panic.




Second example
She picked p the four packs of sleeping pills from her bedside table. Instead of crushing them and mixing them with water, she decided to take them one by one, because there was always a gap between intention and action. She wanted to feel free to turn back half way.



Third example
''No!'', shrieked Lurana, as a brass bullet streaked across her very eyes, corkscrewing towards Lex. embedding itself deep into his broad chest, Succumbing to the intense shockwaves of agony that ricocheted throughout his body, shattering every remnant ounce of will he had left within him to stand. He crumbled down onto the moss-reckoned floor, His spirit nearly purged forth from his body.

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